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crush - Laura Susan Johnson It was a good story, heartwrenching and all. Seriously. The topic is hard, and it was not easy to read about it for me, it was disturbing. But something just felt off. I really didn't like the writing. There is a trap in alternating POVs - I'm tired of reading about the same situation/day in different point of view again and again - I've read shitload of fanfictions enough to hate it. And the narrative should be different in alternating povs, imo, and the both characters sounded the same for me.Or I'm bitching without the reason.