The narration. The narration! I was stunned and shocked at first - I didn't know if it was just southern or what or just poor attempt of writing in Cormack McCarthy's style - but I learned that the way Saba tells her story is the way that she should tell it. And it fits, and I stopped to even noticing it pretty soon.I liked it. Sure,I found some plot-holes and had some wtf moments, but I enjoyed it. And I'm starting the second installment.And yes, it's all written in stars above.